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Jude Portrait by laboratorymonkey Jude Portrait by laboratorymonkey
Jude is a character of mine who has seen action in the form of being played in the tabletop Marvel games, as well as having a story written about her. 
She's an X-Man. One of those Wolverine types.

The contrast and colour looks great on my Cintiq, but looks a little desaturated on my main monitor. I don't know what setting to trust!
I'm digging how this looks and it's obvious you've been practicing over the summer!
The skin looks real good. I also like the soft focus you have to bring peoples eyes to hers.

My only gripe is the shading on the hair looks at odds to that of the face.I think it might be that the soft focus has made you add in more detail to the hair near the face however this has ment that it looks darker than the outer areas. I know you'd expect a bit of edge lighting but it looks like there could do to be some lighter reflective shades where the light is the strongest. I think that might be just above the right brow.

I've had a quick look to find some examples for you. I tried to get as close to the hair style and lighting you went for with these…………

Hope that made sense and that is helps! Also you mentioned the colours looking washed out on your monitor and I'm getting that on my phone too. Maybe have a play with the levels and see?
What do you think?
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September 20, 2014
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